Managing Information Technology Masters Degree personal statement

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I believe that inquisitive and explorative attitude will lead to a continuous learning process. As an RF(Radio Frequency) Engineer. I look for graduate study to refine my knowledge and skills in my areas of interest. I believe it will also serve to give direction to my goal of a career.

Electronic Communications are an industry that has changed our lives. In a very short period, it has changed the way we have looked at things for centuries. It is one industry that is going to shape our future for centuries to come. Hence my desire to do masters in Electronics and communications Engineering. My interest in Electronics dates back the early days of my high school. My career objective is to pursue masters in the field of Electronics and Communication Engineering. I am of the firm conviction that suitable opportunity to pursue graduate studies will help in my endeavour towards realizing my goal, paving the path for self-actualization. And as I said I have achieved my conviction and successfully completed my Masters in Electrical and Computer engineering.

The field of ECE has always fascinated me. My interest started developing in the early stage of my life, when I studied about the invention of computers, moreover about its large size. The transformation from the large size to small palmtops enticed me to know about the factors that are responsible for making computers, also the electronic gadgets so small. I was taken back after seeing a small chip for the first time in my school days, furthermore when it came to my knowledge that this single chip contains more than 1000 transistors, it really became impossible for me to believe, “integrated circuits” was the answer I received but wasn’t able to penetrate the fundamentals of it. Since then, every day I come across with small circuits and spent hours to solve the mystery and finally decided to enter the cave of electronics.

The interest and fascination have evolved into a determination to study the subject deeply. The subjects that I was very much interested was Embedded Systems, Wireless Communications & Networks, Cellular & VLSI, which arouses my curiosity, in fact, all the subjects of electronics are very interesting.

As a student member of various forums in my College, I have been actively associated with various workshops and seminars. Having done a rigorous groundwork in both theoretical and applied electronics & Comm.. , now I am in a position to peep into the realm of higher studies. I am an ambitious person with immense will power. It has been my long cherished dream to complete a masters and eventually comes out as a good engineer, equipped enough to contribute to the larger community. But to gain more expertise, I wish to undertake my graduate study at your prestigious University, which has the best of facilities. I think yours is a right place that would suit my interests and aspirations the best. If you give me a chance to prove myself as a good student, it would be a fine opportunity to realize my dreams and to give a proper fulfillment in my otherwise brilliant academic career.

As I have completed my Bachelor’s in India. I came to the USA to pursue Master’s degree. As I have completed the degree I worked in IT for a while and then I moved back to my core competence field i.e RF Engineering which is a part of the Wireless Communication. I a short span of my Professional career I have gained enormous knowledge and few certifications and planning on to do more. Apart from engineering there is an important interest that I have is in entrepreneurship and planning on to open a startup in the coming years which Is why I want to an another Master’s degree in Managing Information Technology which will help me in understanding and learn the key skills that every entrepreneur needs like software, business, technology, security, legal issues, and leadership.

And I couldn’t find a better university than Sullivan University with busy schedule and work I was very much interested in this flexible curriculum and class schedule will help me develop the skills that I need for the development of my company and also for my startup along with focusing my current Job. I am very much looking forward to starting the class at Sullivan University.

Thank you, for considering my candidature as a prospective graduate student.

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Why this example works — strengths and ways to improve

Your statement has a credible professional story: RF engineer, prior US master's, IT experience, entrepreneurial ambition. But most space argues for an Electronics and Communication Engineering master's you have already completed, so the case for Managing Information Technology arrives late and thinly. Concrete evidence, reflection on work, and clear reasons for this programme are needed.

Subject motivation

which Is why I want to an another Master’s degree in Managing Information Technology

Your real motivation, entrepreneurship, appears only near the end. Listing software, business, security, legal issues and leadership names topics but not why you need them now. Explaining a specific gap you have noticed in your RF or IT work would make this motivation convincing.

Academic preparation

successfully completed my Masters in Electrical and Computer engineering

A completed technical master's is strong preparation, but you never say what you studied, built or researched in it. The listed interests, such as Embedded Systems and VLSI, support engineering rather than management, so their relevance to this degree needs explaining.

Evidence and reflection

I have gained enormous knowledge and few certifications

This is a claim rather than evidence. Naming the certifications, a problem you solved, or a decision where business or security knowledge was lacking would show reflection. The childhood chip anecdote is vivid but leads to engineering, not management.

Relevant experience

I worked in IT for a while and then I moved back

Your IT and RF roles are your most relevant material but receive one sentence. Describe your responsibilities, the teams or projects you worked with, and what they taught you about how technology businesses run. Ordinary workplace detail would carry real weight here.

Credibility and voice

give a proper fulfillment in my otherwise brilliant academic career

Self-assessments like this, together with "immense will power" and "prestigious University," weaken credibility because nothing supports them. A plainer voice describing what you have actually done would read as more mature and confident for an experienced professional.

Structure and format

Hence my desire to do masters in Electronics and communications Engineering

The statement seems to combine an older application with a new ending, producing contradictions in tense and goal. Many grammatical slips, such as "I a short span," and repetition of fascination claims, distract. Reorganise around your current goal and proofread carefully.

What you’ve done well

You have a genuine, coherent career path from a Bachelor's in India to a US master's, IT work, and RF engineering. That gives a mature foundation for a management degree.
You give a practical, specific reason for choosing Sullivan University: its flexible curriculum suits studying alongside your current job.

How this draft could improve

Remove or heavily condense the paragraphs arguing for an Electronics master's you have completed. Use that space to explain why Managing Information Technology is your next step.
Add two or three concrete examples from your RF and IT work showing where business, security or leadership knowledge would have helped you.
Replace unsupported self-praise with specific facts, such as named certifications or projects, and proofread thoroughly for grammar and consistency.

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