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My interest in organisational leadership grew out of a fairly unglamorous job. As a scheduling coordinator for a domiciliary care agency, I build the weekly rotas for around forty care workers. On paper this is logistics; in practice it is the point where the organisation's stated values meet the reality of a carer who has to reach three clients in an hour. When a rota fails, people rarely say the schedule is wrong. They say nobody listens. That gap between formal systems and how people actually experience them is what I want to study properly.
My degree in Business and Management gave me the beginnings of a vocabulary for this. My final-year project looked at how a regional bakery chain introduced a new shift pattern across four sites. I interviewed six supervisors and analysed the internal memos and briefing notes they had used. What struck me was how little the message resembled itself by the time it reached the counter: the same change was presented as a cost measure in one shop and as a fairer system in another, depending on what the supervisor believed. I used Weick's idea of sensemaking to frame this, and the project taught me to be cautious about treating communication as transmission rather than interpretation. It also taught me the limits of a small qualitative sample. I would like to develop stronger research design and quantitative skills so that I can test impressions rather than only describe them.
Since graduating I have read more widely and more sceptically. Edgar Schein's work on organisational culture helped me see why our agency's induction handbook has so little purchase compared with what a new carer learns in their first shadowing shift. I have also been reading about distributed and relational approaches to leadership, which speak to something I observe daily: the carers who hold teams together are seldom the ones with a title. At the same time I am wary of literature that treats leadership as inherently benign. In care work, autonomy is often praised while resources shrink, and I want to examine that tension with more rigour than I can manage alone.
Outside work I am treasurer of a community allotment association with about seventy plot-holders. The role is mostly reconciling subscriptions and chasing water bills, but it has been an education in governance. Our committee has no authority anyone is obliged to respect, so decisions about waiting lists or shared tools depend entirely on whether members feel the process was fair. Drafting a clearer set of allocation rules with two other members, and explaining them at a poorly attended meeting, taught me more about legitimacy than any case study. I also share the care of my grandmother with my aunt at weekends, which has made me an unusually attentive reader of rotas from the other side, and has taught me to plan around other people's commitments without resentment.
A taught master's suits me because I want structured grounding in organisational theory, change and research methods rather than a purely practical qualification. My aim over the next few years is to move into workforce development or operations management within health and social care, where retention problems are usually described as pay problems and are often also management problems. I would welcome the chance to examine that claim carefully, and to write a dissertation on how frontline scheduling practices shape whether care staff stay. Studying part-time alongside my current role would let me test ideas against a real organisation week by week.
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