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Personal statement example
My interest in European law began with a seminar problem about a national rule banning the sale of a food product on safety grounds. What struck me was not the outcome but the structure of the argument: the way a trader's commercial complaint becomes a question about who is entitled to decide what counts as a risk, and how much evidence a state must offer before its judgement is respected. I spent the rest of my LLB returning to that tension, and I would like to study it properly at master's level.
My dissertation looked at mutual recognition in the free movement of goods, focusing on how far a member state can maintain its own technical or safety standards once a product is lawfully marketed elsewhere. Reading Cassis de Dijon alongside later case law made me appreciate how much work the proportionality test is asked to do, and how differently it functions depending on the quality of the scientific material before the court. Writing the chapter on precaution was the most useful part of my degree: I had to be honest about where the case law was genuinely inconsistent rather than tidying it into a neat rule. My supervisor's main criticism, that I had described too much and evaluated too little, has stayed with me and changed how I read judgments.
Alongside my studies I made a small independent project out of something that was initially just revision. I was struggling to keep track of preliminary references, so I built a spreadsheet-based database recording the referring court, the treaty provision at issue, the question asked and the outcome, with filters so I could pull up, for example, all references from tax tribunals on a particular article. It was unglamorous work, mostly typing, but it taught me a lot: patterns in which national courts refer, and how often the answer given reframes the question asked. I shared it with three classmates and one of them added a column on Advocate General opinions, which improved it. I do not claim it is original research, but it made me a more careful reader and I would like to develop the underlying questions about the referral procedure in a taught setting.
Group work has been less natural for me, so I was pleased with how a mooting exercise on services regulation went in my second year. My partner and I divided the argument clearly, rehearsed each other's weak points, and I learned to abandon a line of argument quickly when the bench was unpersuaded rather than defending it out of pride.
Since graduating I have worked as an administrative officer in a local authority licensing team, processing applications and preparing papers for committee. It is not European law, but it has given me a realistic sense of how regulatory decisions are actually made: the pressure of deadlines, the reliance on standard forms, and how much depends on whether an officer notices that an application raises an unusual point. I also volunteer as a gateway assessor at Citizens Advice, where listening to people describe a problem and identifying the legal question inside it is essentially the skill my degree tried to teach.
I want to study European law at master's level to work seriously on internal market regulation and the relationship between national and EU decision-making, including how these questions now arise for the UK from the outside. In the longer term I hope to move into regulatory or public law practice, and I would like to be the kind of lawyer who understands the administrative reality behind the case law as well as the doctrine.
Why this example works — strengths and ways to improve
This is a strong, coherent taught master's statement. You trace a genuine intellectual thread from a seminar problem through your dissertation to a self-built database, and your reflection is honest rather than performative. The main gaps are a thin final paragraph on what you will study, and a group-work paragraph that adds little.
Subject motivation
who is entitled to decide what counts as a risk
Your opening works because it names a precise intellectual problem, allocation of authority over risk, rather than a vague love of law. It also sets up the precaution and proportionality material that follows, so your motivation reads as sustained interest rather than a single anecdote.
Academic preparation
how differently it functions depending on the quality of the scientific material
This shows you have engaged with proportionality as an analytical tool, not just a heading. Naming Cassis de Dijon is fine, but you could briefly say which later line of cases you meant, so a reader can see the depth of your reading for advanced study.
Evidence and reflection
I had described too much and evaluated too little
Reporting your supervisor's criticism, and saying it changed how you read judgments, is real reflection. One concrete example of how your reading now differs would make it more persuasive. The admission of inconsistency in the case law also shows intellectual honesty suited to master's work.
Relevant experience
how much depends on whether an officer notices that an application raises an unusual point
Your licensing role is ordinary but well used. You draw a specific, credible insight about regulatory decision-making that connects to your stated aims. The database is excellent evidence of initiative, and you frame it modestly and accurately as not original research.
Credibility and voice
It was unglamorous work, mostly typing, but it taught me a lot
Your tone is measured and believable throughout. The claims are proportionate to an LLB graduate. However, calling Citizens Advice gateway assessment essentially the skill your degree taught slightly overstates the link. Saying what the work involves would be more convincing.
Structure and format
Group work has been less natural for me
The structure is mostly logical, but this mooting paragraph sits awkwardly between the database and employment sections, and its point is weaker. Your conclusion gestures at the UK's external position without developing it, so the ending feels less specific than the opening.
What you’ve done well
- The seminar problem, dissertation and database project form one connected line of enquiry about authority, evidence and the referral procedure.
- Your reflection admits limits, such as the supervisor's criticism and the database not being research, which makes your claims credible.
How this draft could improve
- Expand the final paragraph. Say which questions about the UK's relationship to internal market rules you want to explore, and how taught study would develop your referral-procedure interest.
- Cut or compress the mooting paragraph, keeping only the point about abandoning weak arguments if it supports your readiness for seminars.
- When tailoring for a real programme, link your interests to its actual content without overstating fit.