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My degree gave me the methods; the market stall gave me the questions. For the past three years I have spent most Saturdays helping my mother sell second-hand books, first from a table at a weekend market and then through an online listings account she asked me to set up. Watching people browse taught me how much of buying is not deliberation at all. Books facing spine-out barely moved; the same titles laid flat with their covers showing sold within an hour. Customers who picked a book up almost always bought it. When we listed online, the photographs and the first line of the description mattered far more than the price. I wanted a proper vocabulary and better evidence for what I was noticing, and that is what led me towards consumer psychology.
My BSc gave me the grounding. I found the judgement and decision-making material most compelling, and read around it: Kahneman's Thinking, Fast and Slow started me off, but the sources I returned to were Thaler and Sunstein's Nudge, for its argument that choice architecture is unavoidable rather than optional, and Cialdini's Influence, which I read more critically after covering replication problems in a research methods module. Learning that several well-known social psychology findings have proved fragile changed how I read popular behavioural science. I now look first at sample sizes, effect sizes and whether a study was preregistered, and I am wary of claims that a single cue reliably shifts behaviour across contexts.
For my dissertation I ran an online experiment on default options in charitable giving. Participants chose a donation amount from a set list, with the pre-selected option varied between conditions. The higher default raised average donations but also increased the proportion who opted out of donating entirely, which was not what I had predicted and made the write-up much more interesting than a clean confirmation would have been. I designed the task in Qualtrics, recruited through a participant platform, and analysed the data in R, learning to run and interpret an ANOVA and to plot distributions rather than relying on means alone. The clearest lesson was how many decisions sit inside an apparently simple design: the order of the amounts, the wording of the opt-out, how long participants had to respond.
My paid work is in the plant and outdoor section of a garden centre, where I spend a lot of time answering questions from customers who are not sure what they want. People rarely ask for the cheapest option; they ask what will survive, what is easy, what looks like the picture they have in mind. Handling refunds and complaints has shown me how strongly the experience after purchase shapes whether someone returns. I also run a monthly board games evening at a community centre, which involves rota-keeping, persuading people to try unfamiliar games and writing a short newsletter that at least some of them read.
I am applying for postgraduate study because I want to move from noticing patterns to testing them properly. I am particularly interested in how online interfaces structure choice, in the ethical limits of influencing consumers who are not aware of being influenced, and in whether findings from laboratory tasks hold up in field settings. I would like to strengthen my statistics, gain experience of qualitative methods such as interviews and diary studies, which my undergraduate degree touched on only briefly, and complete a research project with real behavioural data. In the longer term I hope to work in consumer insight or behavioural research, on the evidence side rather than the persuasion side.
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