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When I true a bicycle wheel at the repair shop where I work, I am adjusting thirty-two spokes so that tension is shared evenly and the rim runs straight. Turning one nipple a quarter-turn changes the load in its neighbours, and a wheel that looks true can still fail early if a few spokes carry most of the load. I started the job for the wages during my second year, but it has become a practical reminder of something my degree kept returning to: structures behave as systems, and the fatigue life of a part depends on how load reaches it.
I graduated with a 2:1 in Mechanical Engineering, and my strongest marks came in solid mechanics, dynamics and finite element analysis. For my individual project I studied the vibration of a cantilevered bracket of the kind used to mount small solar panels on narrowboat roofs. My supervisor suggested the problem after a local owner reported cracked welds. I modelled the bracket in a commercial FEA package, then tested an aluminium version on the department's shaker table, using strain gauges near the root and an accelerometer at the tip.
My first model predicted a natural frequency about fifteen per cent higher than I measured. Rather than adjusting the material properties until the numbers matched, I worked through the likely causes. The bolted clamp at the root was not behaving as a fixed support, so I tried modelling it as a spring connection with a stiffness estimated from a simple static test. That brought the prediction much closer, and it changed my conclusion: the stress concentration at the clamp edge, not the weld itself, was where the design was most sensitive. I recommended a longer clamping plate with rounded edges, though I was clear in my report that I had only tested one geometry and a short range of frequencies. That limitation is one reason I want further study. I could set up a test and run a model, but I lack depth in fatigue under variable-amplitude loading, in nonlinear contact, and in judging when a simplified model is good enough.
The repair shop has given me a different kind of evidence. I deal with customers who describe faults vaguely, so I have learnt to reproduce a creak or a skipping gear before replacing anything. I keep a notebook of failures I see repeatedly, such as cracked rear dropouts on older steel frames and seized seatposts in aluminium frames, and I have read around galvanic corrosion and fretting to understand them. None of this is research, but it has made me curious about how components fail in service rather than on paper, which is where I hope to focus during a master's degree, particularly in structural integrity and the use of simulation alongside physical testing.
Outside work I play the tenor horn in a brass band that rehearses twice a week and competes in regional contests. Band has taught me steady commitment to a group where my part only matters in combination with everyone else's, and I have taken on organising the music library and transport for contests. I also drive my grandfather to his hospital and optician appointments most fortnights, which means planning shifts and study around fixed times. Managing these commitments during my final year, while completing my project, gave me a realistic sense of how I work under a full timetable.
I have kept my mathematics current since graduating by working through problems in a structural dynamics textbook and by teaching myself basic Python to process accelerometer data, which I had previously done slowly in spreadsheets. I would like to develop that into proper signal processing skills.
I am applying for postgraduate study because I want to move from competent use of engineering tools to a sound understanding of their assumptions. In the longer term I would like to work in design and testing for transport or energy equipment, where small brackets and joints decide whether larger systems survive. A rigorous year of advanced study, with a substantial project, is the most direct way for me to get there.