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The bedroom wall in the 1930s semi-detached house I studied for my dissertation read nineteen per cent on a borrowed moisture meter in January and eleven per cent in June. The owners had been told the problem was rising damp. My readings, taken at three heights over five months alongside temperature and humidity loggers, suggested something more ordinary: condensation on a cold external corner that had become colder since new loft insulation stopped short of the eaves. That project, completed for my BEng in Architectural Engineering, is the clearest example I have of why I want to study civil and architectural engineering at postgraduate level. I enjoyed the physics, but what held my attention was how one well-intended intervention changed the behaviour of the whole building.
My degree gave me a sound base in structural analysis, heat and mass transfer, building services and construction materials. I did best in modules that asked me to model something and then test the model against reality. In the dissertation I used a simple steady-state calculation to estimate surface temperatures, then compared it with logged data. The calculation overestimated the corner temperature by about two degrees on the coldest days, and working out why, through thermal bridging at the junction and air movement behind a wardrobe, taught me more than the calculation itself. I graduated with a 2:1 and a clear sense that I want to understand the gap between design assumptions and how buildings perform once people live in them.
Since graduating I have worked as an assistant to a small building surveying practice. Most of my time goes on measured surveys: taking dimensions, photographing defects, and turning field notes into CAD drawings for the surveyors who write the reports. I do not make professional judgements, but I see a great many existing houses, flats and small commercial units, and I have learned to record carefully, because a missing dimension means another site visit. The work has made me interested in retrofit at scale. Much of the housing I survey will still be standing in 2050, and improving it without creating new moisture or ventilation problems seems to me one of the most practical engineering challenges there is. I would like to develop the analytical depth, particularly in building physics, energy modelling and structural assessment of existing fabric, that my current role cannot provide.
Outside work I volunteer once a month at a repair café in our local community centre, mostly fixing lamps, kettles and the occasional vacuum cleaner under the eye of a retired electrician who checks every safety test. It is not engineering in the formal sense, but explaining to someone why a part has failed, and whether it is worth fixing, is a skill I use at work too. I also play badminton for a club in a regional league, which keeps two evenings a week firmly away from screens.
Studying abroad appeals to me partly because Nordic countries have long experience of building for cold climates and high energy standards, and I would value learning in a setting where those concerns are routine rather than exceptional. I have started learning Swedish through an evening class, so far with modest results, and I am comfortable working in English across technical subjects.
I am a careful, methodical student who likes evidence more than assumptions, and I work well with people who know more than I do. I would bring practical familiarity with real buildings and their defects, a dissertation that taught me to question my own models, and a steady motivation to improve the buildings people already live in. A master's degree would let me turn that motivation into the technical competence needed to do it well.