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Geography personal statement

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  • Published: 14th December 2019
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Is a nation’s geography crucial in establishing its history, as explored by Marshall in his book Prisoners of Geography? What can be learnt from individual hazards if they involve a unique combination of geophysical and social circumstances? Underlying questions have stemmed my interest in studying Geography as it illuminates past and contemporary challenges. Such challenges have been seen to encompass factors that influence my surroundings, particularly regeneration projects in East London. The Docklands, for example, is perceived as a successful project to many but the fact that it has created spatial divisions between Poplar and Canary Wharf, defined by red line boundaries reinforced by the DLR was a personal realisation on how physicality is an influence, after reading Marshall’s book. Wider scale issues such as the UK’s commitment to climate deals post-Brexit are also an interest due to the impact on the natural environment, exacerbated by attending the British Ecological Society summer school.

One issue explored was the impacts of the anthropocene on the Amazonian rainforest. Recognising changes from the 8,500 year old sediment record from Lake Carana proved the pre-Columbian transformation of the environment via human induced activity such as fire and polyculture. It is important to consider the rapid changes Earth Systems face from such actions, hence leading to my research into planetary boundaries. Discovering that the framework is currently set at the “safe” zone of uncertainty and that any transgression would lead to an erosion of resilience led me to partake in the Global Challenges Project. The issue I explored intertwined with sustainable development goals, looking at how everyone can have sufficient clean water without conflict. Biomimicry was one way that our research group took interest in; it shows that water harvesting structures are possible by designing them like the systems of biological entities. Water harvesting architecture could store collected water by looking at how drought-tolerant plants, such as crystalline ice, retain it to survive in arid environments. Placing these structures in areas unaccessible can give hope, being equitable and sustainable. This goes against Marshall’s rule that society is affected solely by its geography, and how technology is a bending rule that can overpower it. Working towards these development goals through the multifaceted concepts of geography can allow landlocked countries isolated by physical barriers to be transformed and integrated into the global economy.

Having academic sessions on what originally seemed like two different topics at the Sutton Trust Summer School taught me skills on how to link the interdisciplinary concepts of geography together. I realised how industrialisation could be linked to both of my other A Levels. The link to biology was shown through the impact the Industrial Revolution had on London, particularly the River Wandle. I had a firsthand experience of going to the river and testing its phosphate and nitrate content and the different types of species present. The high chemical levels showed conditions difficult for aquatic organisms to survive and the sample of species from the river gave a calculated average value of 4.1, less than the required 6.1, showing there were less high rated organisms in the river that are more tolerant. This shows the reduction in biodiversity and how industrialisation has caused the urban stream syndrome. Not only could I link this to Biology, but I also learnt practical skills of the importance of repeating samples at the right time and places as high nitrate and phosphate content could have been due to the heatwave at the time, leading to less water and higher concentration of chemicals. The second session on cultural geography linked to psychology. The industrial revolution changed landscapes to present the desires of the 19th century and psycho- geography looks at how environment affected behaviour. Walking around London, it was interesting to see how the Strand area was rebuilt in the 19th century, to create landscapes of power and gendered memory. The Royal Courts of Justice was built to look older than it actually is, to make it seem like it has always been there and so law has been there and will remain. This was to maintain behaviour. Seeing how the industrial revolution affected both the biology and culture of London taught me that subject can be linked in abstract ways.

In my spare time, I like to be involved with youth projects such as Peer Coaching for Change and NCY. Through this, I have developed communication skills by considering the views of others and implementing this to make a positive change in my area, such as by delivering hampers to locals to break down any negative stereotypes that the older generation had towards the young. By balancing regular sessions with studies, I believe that I am a hardworking and conscientious student that can bring enthusiasm to this subject.

Why this example works — strengths and ways to improve

This Geography statement shows genuine curiosity rooted in East London and supported by summer schools, fieldwork and a research project. Its best moments are concrete, especially the River Wandle sampling. However, several scientific claims are inaccurate or muddled, the Marshall thread is overstretched, and frequent dense phrasing weakens clarity. Tighter, more accurate explanation would let your evident engagement come through more convincingly.

Subject motivation

a personal realisation on how physicality is an influence, after reading Marshall’s book

Linking Marshall to the visible divide between Poplar and Canary Wharf is a strong, personal starting point. It shows geography shaping your own surroundings. The opening rhetorical questions are less distinctive, and "stemmed my interest" is awkward. The Docklands observation could lead the paragraph.

Academic preparation

the 8,500 year old sediment record from Lake Carana

Engagement with palaeoecology, planetary boundaries and the Sustainable Development Goals shows wide reading. The precision falters, however. Planetary boundaries are not "currently set at the safe zone" in the way you describe, and "crystalline ice" is not a drought-tolerant plant. Errors like these undercut otherwise ambitious preparation, so check each claim carefully.

Evidence and reflection

high nitrate and phosphate content could have been due to the heatwave

This is your best reflection. You question your own data and explain why repeat sampling, timing and location matter, which shows real methodological thinking. The biotic score explanation is confused, though. It says fewer "high rated organisms" are "more tolerant", which reverses the logic. Clarifying this would strengthen it.

Relevant experience

delivering hampers to locals to break down any negative stereotypes

The youth projects are worthwhile and show community involvement. However, the final paragraph reduces them to generic communication skills. You could link this work to social geography, intergenerational space or the regeneration themes you raised earlier, so it becomes evidence rather than a closing list.

Credibility and voice

technology is a bending rule that can overpower it

Challenging Marshall shows independent thinking. But calling his argument a "rule" that society is affected "solely" by geography oversimplifies it, and the leap to landlocked countries joining the global economy feels forced. Measured, accurate claims would make your voice more persuasive than sweeping conclusions.

Structure and format

taught me that subject can be linked in abstract ways

The paragraphs follow a logical sequence: motivation, research, interdisciplinary learning, then wider activities. Within them, long sentences and phrases like "exacerbated by attending" obscure meaning. The Strand section drifts into description. The ending relies on self-assessment ("hardworking and conscientious") rather than returning to your geographical interests.

What you’ve done well

  • The River Wandle fieldwork gives concrete data and a thoughtful critique of sampling conditions.
  • Local observation of the Docklands and the DLR anchors your interest in lived experience rather than abstraction.

How this draft could improve

  • Fact-check the scientific content, including planetary boundaries, the plant example and the biotic index explanation.
  • Simplify sentences and replace misused words such as "stemmed", "exacerbated" and "unaccessible" so your ideas read clearly.
  • End by connecting your activities and reading to what you want to explore in Geography, rather than listing personal qualities.

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