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My interest in the area of Film began in Junior School where I completed a course which involved producing a short film. This gave me an insight into the subject that would lead to a creative and fulfilling career.
During GCSE Film Studies, my favourite part of the course was looking at the Cinematography of Film as I enjoyed studying and analysing the creative choices that were made to give the film the correct effect that the director wanted to portray. This qualification confirmed my passion to pursue a career in film.
I am a self-taught photographer with an eye for detail. My portfolio includes a wide range of subjects with many diverse themes and this year I completed a photography course that allowed me to build up my knowledge and improve my skills. I feel that the technical skills I have gained over the years will be invaluable towards my chosen course at university.
I am currently in the process of making a promotional video for my local animal rescue centre where I am interviewing the staff about the rescue and bringing awareness to the animals that are in desperate need. I also recently returned from a trip to New York which inspired me to create a cinematic video about my experience there. I have contacted local film studios offering my services as a volunteer to enable me to gain experience and skills in a working environment and hope to get the opportunity in the near future in preparation for university.
I wasn’t able to choose Film as an option at A level but the subjects I have taken have helped me gain the relative skills for studying at undergraduate level such as leadership, organisation, and resilience. Throughout my time in Sixth Form, I have conducted many presentations that I have completed with confidence and accuracy and have found teamwork beneficial and enjoyable.
During Sixth Form, I have participated in a number of Open Events where I have been involved with parents and pupils on a question and answer basis. I was chosen to help Year 11’s with their Geography coursework which I did within my own time during school holidays. Both roles have been beneficial to my communication skills and have developed my ability to work confidently with all ages. After volunteering at primary schools helping out with after-school sports activities, I obtained a permanent position with Sefton’s ‘Active Kidz’. This position has helped my awareness of different behaviours of children of all ages and has taught me how to take responsibility control of a large group of different personalities whilst also learning how to manage my time effectively and finding a balance between work, school and leisure time. As mentioned, I have been volunteering at Freshfields Animal Rescue Centre for nine years as a registered dog walker and fundraiser, I have had experience with more troubled animals and the staff are confident that I can carry out my duties efficiently and safely. I enjoy the challenge of winning the trust of the dogs and seeing them progress in their behaviour.
I completed my Bronze Duke of Edinburgh Award two years ago and this year I went on to achieve my Silver Award. Although I found the Silver Award a demanding experience, the sense of achievement was the biggest reward. I am currently working towards the Gold Duke of Edinburgh Award which will demonstrate my determination and resilience even further. I was chosen to represent my school in an International Netball Tournament in Florida, involving intense training ending with the tournament. I appreciated the diversity as it allowed me to interact with different cultures and make long-lasting friendships.
During my internship at Lace Factory Studios, a photography and videography studio in Nottingham, I had the opportunity to work on various aspects of film production. I assisted in setting up lighting and camera equipment for studio shoots, helped organize and manage video shoots, and participated in post-production editing using professional software. This hands-on experience provided me with valuable insights into the technical and creative processes involved in professional filmmaking, reinforcing my passion for the field and enhancing my practical skills in a real-world setting.
Several visits to Open Days and Campus Tours at Edge Hill University confirmed my decision to pursue a degree in the area of film as I was impressed and excited with the excellence of the facilities offered to students there. The challenges of university have always appealed to me and I feel I am highly motivated to meet the demands it will bring.
Why this example works — strengths and ways to improve
Your statement shows genuine practical engagement with filmmaking, especially the rescue-centre video and studio internship, but it rarely explains what you learned about film itself. Much of the middle lists general activities and skills. Sharpening your reflection on cinematography, editing and your own projects, and resolving one sequencing tension, would make your motivation far more convincing.
Subject motivation
I enjoyed studying and analysing the creative choices that were made
This is your most promising motivational moment, but it stays abstract. Naming a film, a shot or a lighting choice you analysed, and saying what it revealed, would show curiosity rather than assert passion. The Junior School opening and the 'confirmed my passion' line are general and could be cut or made specific.
Academic preparation
I wasn't able to choose Film as an option at A level
Acknowledging this gap is sensible, but the follow-up lists leadership, organisation and resilience rather than showing how your A level subjects connect to studying film. Linking a specific subject skill, such as essay analysis or visual composition, to film study would answer this more directly.
Evidence and reflection
I am interviewing the staff about the rescue and bringing awareness to the animals
This is concrete, accessible evidence, and an ordinary local project can be excellent. What is missing is reflection: how you planned interviews, structured the edit or chose shots to create emotion. The New York video and photography portfolio would likewise benefit from one example of a decision you made and learned from.
Relevant experience
assisted in setting up lighting and camera equipment for studio shoots
The Lace Factory internship is your strongest relevant evidence, with specific tasks named. However, the summary sentence relies on phrases like 'valuable insights' and 'real-world setting'. Describe one shoot or editing problem and what it taught you about professional workflow, so the experience reads as learning rather than a role description.
Credibility and voice
hope to get the opportunity in the near future in preparation for university
This sits awkwardly beside the later internship paragraph, making the timeline unclear. Similarly, 'As mentioned' introduces nine years of animal-rescue volunteering not previously stated. Clarifying sequence and removing generic skill claims would strengthen your voice. The line about winning dogs' trust is your most personal sentence.
Structure and format
As mentioned, I have been volunteering at Freshfields Animal Rescue Centre
Your film material is split across paragraphs four, eight and nine, interrupted by open events, coursework help, sports coaching, Duke of Edinburgh and netball. Grouping film evidence together and compressing extracurriculars would improve flow. The Edge Hill ending names facilities but not which ones suit your goals.
What you’ve done well
- The promotional video for the animal rescue centre is a self-initiated, purposeful project that connects your filmmaking to a real community need.
- The internship paragraph names concrete tasks, lighting, camera setup, shoot organisation and post-production editing, giving tangible evidence of practical preparation.
How this draft could improve
- Choose one or two film projects and explain specific creative or technical decisions you made, what went wrong or right, and what you would do differently.
- Reduce the extracurricular list to brief mentions and use the space to discuss films, cinematographers or techniques that shaped your interest in cinematography.
- Fix the internship and volunteering timeline, and make the Edge Hill reference specific about what in the course or facilities matches your aims.
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